Black Poetry : Fire & Water

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Aug 13, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from the first moments inside
    each other’s space
    they felt pure energy

    …as hours gave way to days
    came evidence of their natural
    synergy

    she was clearly
    keeper of his flame
    & he quenched a thirst in her
    no one else could tame…

    her sultry fires could stir him
    sweetly to a boil
    his soothing waters anointed
    her like virgin oil

    she would wade in him and
    be happy in the drowning
    their repeated joy bound so
    tightly in the “crowning”

    he was consumed by her
    but never was he burned
    and for her love he lived
    and for her heat, he yearned..

    and thus, they performed
    this fire/water dance
    …discovering the many
    ways & secrets of romance

    careful to always cherish
    their separate properties
    obedient to the law of nature:
    “to know pleasure is to please”….



    a
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    **** :ALYCE

    you flipped this
    i like that fire&water
    sample
    now water can put out fire
    and fire can dry up water
    ????????

    but when they do meet they sure sizzle

    LOVEDEDID IT

    DSSNY
     
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    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    This felt real. I am in awe of the beauty of ya flow.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooops!

    ...She's gone and blew the spot to bits...nice piece alyce, hit a brother again...please


    blak
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you sho know how to
    put ideas together and
    make them dance
    beautifully!
    thank you.
    -7
     
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