Black Poetry : Fire & Water

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Jul 23, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love a man
    When he is
    Summer

    Clear bedroom
    Sky eyes

    Dried wildflowers
    Floating
    For a foot-rub

    Bath salts and
    Seashells
    Lining the
    Bubblebath tub

    Candles scented
    With passion-flames

    And
    I love
    The love games

    Heated palms
    And how they
    Penetrate me
    With a
    Burning body massage

    And skin
    Rubbing on....skin
    Rubbing on......skin
    Rubbing on........skin

    Creating friction
    Deep inside of me

    Ooooh....
    Right there...baby
    Right there.......baby
    Don't stop.............baby
    Don't stop........................

    And

    I love a man
    When he is Summer

    Because when
    He brings the thunder

    I don't even feel the rain...


    *Liquid Flows*

    Hunter
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  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's the heat of my night over here,

    and I'm feeling this with every part of me! How passionate are those flames...and how refreshing are those waters...and how intense is his thunder that overshadows your rain!

    yes!

    thank you for this Ms. Hunter!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ahhhhhh!!

    FEELING THE DEPTH OF DA LIQUID FLOWS***
    U POSE WITHIN ME THE SUMMER SHOWER
    OF LOVE DROPS UPON MY FACE ....BEAUTIFULLY DISPLAYED
    HUNTER..,LOVIN' IT.:heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOMEBODEEEEEEEEE Call 911!

    Git a h2o hose, a bucket of h2o, a h2o gun. Hunter done started a fire up in heah.
    Dem sum hot words. Heated palms, burning massage

    Hunter you burnt this one up. It's flaming :hot:

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hunter,

    your scribes have reached a new place..they speak of new found joy not from a moment of alone, but of time together...many well wishes to you and your muse...

    ***umbrella sonnets***
     
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    "i love a man when he is summer" ?
    your flow is so profound yet i can say
    yeah, when a man is summer!
    thank you thank you thank you...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    oh!

    i may not be summer but AUTUMN is around the corner and I COME to say that a brutha can get all caught up in the golden hues of leaves dancing in the breeze as we run through the piles of DARE I DO THIS and ROLLING IN THE MIST of cool, evening air. NO...i don't bring the thunder...but i'd make you wonder how you tolerated your yesterdayz without big balla's rhythmic sway.

    YA HEARD ME?:)

    LOVED THE FLOW, Huntress.
    do what you do.
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...these responses are burning a hole in my liquid page;) .

    Seriously....thank-you poets...for your humour and your insight.

    More Liquid Flows....and Vagina Chronicles coming your way!! Dress appropriately for the indoor weather;)

    *thunder-scribes*
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter....


    You & da Liquid Flowz....
    got a sista ova here splashin'... AGAIN! :)

    i'ont mind bein' wet tho!

    write on poetess... write on!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  10. shaneak

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    Boy i tell you...

    You be working it out don't ya girl...Keep coming wit them liquid flows...All i need to say is.. "GIVE ME SOME MO!!!"
     
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