Black Poetry : FIRE & DESIRE a Angel & $$RicH$$ collab

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 22, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BlkAngel..
    Roamin within da sheets
    groanin and swayin
    feelin da bliss
    bodies yearn
    toss and turn
    sweat covers
    we escape into each other
    the show begins
    back and forth
    reachin and searchin
    in ya eyes cryin 4 more
    as we dancin to our music
    round n round
    holdin hands
    mixin , dippin , playin
    in the extreme
    rapture of bliss
    captured in da mist
    pure essence
    within our souls
    unfold to exchange
    movin smooth
    hittin a groove
    in perfect harmony
    within da shadow
    of night ridin the plains
    to lovers land
    fire flames rollin, feelin, moanin
    holdin, twistin, tastin
    in da mist of extreme motion
    we embrace a sweet flow.......

    $$RICH$$
    deep desire of extreme
    light da fire to ya dream
    send ya body in a scream
    as we mixin between da sheets
    caressin , feastin , treatin
    in da bliss of ecstacy
    fulfill ya fantasy as we lay
    playin , body swayin
    sweatin dippin slippin deep
    eyes rollin back
    to dis twistin , blissin
    erotic electric wave
    cravin as we lay
    feverish hip rockin
    as we be lockin
    hot splash
    lips clash
    in da extreme
    wetness of da mixin
    rollin to da left
    jumppin in da right
    up da middle
    poppin it tyte
    in a embrace
    to be trace from
    da look to da face
    steppin, spinnin ,
    sexual healin
    in da desire of destiny
    fire flames burnin
    bodies yearnin
    moanin , groanin
    soundz rumblin
    bed knockin
    toes lockin
    tiny nibbles
    as souls cross
    galaxy into da starz
    as we lay within
    da bliss of flow
    rollin round n round
    a glo on da flo
    up da wall
    holla's & calls
    layin raw
    from da
    fire & desire
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this is steamin...do ya thang.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah yall doing that thang nice collab
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when da fire & desire strikes never know
    how passion run thankz
    watz & bluewater
     
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    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: hi

    good-afternoon RICH & mzblkangel


    brother just getting around to reading over this poetic piece...


    Favorite Lines: mzblkangel



    &

    Favorite Lines: RICH



    :jawdrop: there indeed is a poetic connection between you two... how can one deny what has just happen... i mean it's like you two combined as one, and blessed us with this masterpiece... i do hope each poet takes the time to fully absorb this romantic/sensual/erotic collab... so much poetic richness has overtaken this piece, as i'm truly speechless at this time...


    continue to mold your writing skillz, as i'm definitely going to be looking out for your work in the near future...


    have a nice day Rich - mzblkangel...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: this was a straight head banger :fight: U two are always on a vibe when posting together. Much love and respect to the 2 of you. :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my brutha my brutha
    your words touch me
    and i truely thank u
    MrAfrica for the visit to our scribe of collab
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow wow wow...:eeek: mrafrica said it all...truly there is a poetic connection :) :grouphug: it was smoooooooooth
     
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    thanklz brutha caramelpython
    we try our best at what we do

    sistah Triniti big thanks
    u know i'm BaccccK !!!!
     
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    watzinaname and Bluewater....thank you both for the
    love on this piece....glad you likes

    mrafrica...wow thank you brother..your words are so kind....
    i am happy you enjoyed it..bro $$RICH$$...speaks loud for the both of us....
    big thanks....

    caramelpython...thank you..indeed we do are best....

    triniti424..yea girl he back Yeahhhhhhhhhhh!!! thanks sis
    glad ya likes....

    Peace and Love fam....

    Brother $$RICH$$...it is always a honor to work with you
    thank you.....Peace and love to you
    Angel
     
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