Black Haiku : FINISH TO START

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 4, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Death is the Ending of Life!
    Life is the Beginning of Death!

    Don't die before the end,
    Live Between from concept to finish!
     
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    This piece spoke to me in da most high
     
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    THIS FLOW SPEAKS OF THE TRAPPINGS.
    DRUGS, ALCOHOL AND GETTING SO WRAPPED
    IN MATERIAL WEALTH THAT ONE IS LOST AND
    NEVER REALLY LIVED OR LOVED.

    Sometimes shortly after conception and well before our time.
    Many die in the middle of this life and never know true love.
    Love of life, self, and another.

    Thank you Brother $$RICH$$ for the read.
    My son dropped this on me.
    What I have told him, and discussed with him has fruit.
     
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    The last 2 lines are the hardest hitting for me.


    The whole reminds me of what the Old Ones say....."Laugh when a loved one dies and Weep when a child is born."


    Good "fruit" here! :toast:
     
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