Black Short Stories : Finish this Story Everyone

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    Let's all colaborate on this. This is a group effort. Add new scenes to this with new characters interacting with old characters.
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    Terry lay in waram comfort, contemplating the cold room that waited for her outside her blanket. She did not want to get up. Cold air slid under the covers, then ran a cool course up her lege, over mountains, through valleys and down the chasm of her spine where the north wind meets the south. She closed her eyes thinking that if she lay still for another five minutes she might remember what she had been dreaming about. What it was? Someone was kissing her in a dream. She tried to recapture the deep voice, strong hands, piercing eyes but she was too much awake. She sat up and looked around, still searching for that dream but it was gone. Nothing was left but reality--the cold reality of an empty oom.
     
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    Just cross the way lay a dear friend, inside his own slumber awaiting
    his nighten gal of beauty from the depth of his heart laying still covered
    in the moment of rapture, she was his sleeping beauty where her warmth
    caresses but billy boy knew he was dreamin the room was cold and dark
    out of the shadow from the flicking candle light was an image as it brush
    his face and stroke him gentle the cool breeze swoop upward sending a
    massive chill, yet comfort between snors and tiny movement he awaken
    to the silent brisk and the clapping window pane and the owl hooting he
    knew his reality and was shaken from this dream.

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    The phone rang. Terry smiled to herself as she answered. "Hello?" "Hello, sweetheart. Dreaming of me again?" Terry wanted to come up with a witty reply, but, she wasn't even going to try to front. He was always making guest appearances during her slumber. "Yes, babe, just like every other night." He laughed. "Well, you know I was dreaming of you as well." She laughed. "Well, you know, you could come on over, and then we wouldn't have to dream about it any more." He said, "I'll be right over." Terry wrapped herself tightly in her blanket, anticipating the deep embrace that surely awaited her.

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    And from the sprakle in terry eyes awaiting the moment of reality
    deep inside her night hour covered in the cool blanket, time stood
    still that moment til a rang! and soft tap rappin at the door she
    was back into a slumber of dreams awakening to voice "who's their"
    it is i my loveth for i rush from the solo dream unto you to warm the
    glaze, softly whispered, cometh in my dear i'm up here as terry await
    his arrival he turn into the dark room in his hand a bottle of champaign
    to toast the night together billy she cry out from the chills a brisky wind
    blowing inward sliding under covers skin touch skin toes curl and fingers
    dance cuddle up toasting from the sips to lips locking heated passion lurks
    for the dreams and awakening to emptyness now filled the air mass and room
    tempture rise slowly .

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    In another bedroom, not far away, a lonely heart reread an old tattered letter. The letter ended with these words....I will never regret our time together, Curtis, and I'm so happy that we can somehow remain friends. Love, Terry. How he missed her. Curtis couldn't help but remember her soft skin and sweet embraces. He grimaced at the thought of her new love, Billy taking hold of what was once his. I was such a fool, he thought, as the empty bottle of gin slipped from his hands onto the rug, beside the tattered letter.

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    Such a fool. And all the time I was thinking she was the fool. All the time I thought I had the deck marked. Then she called out gin.

    Curtis stumbled to the window and watched the fallen leaves playing in the driving breeze. It was Sunday but there was no sun. Just a brightness that looked like warmth but contained only the chill of invisible winds.
     
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    becoming brisky and windy by night fall , i hear the call
    how can i not see or know from the deck seem so foolish
    or did i just stumble away in gin she was like mae and the
    rest , i'm not tame by this beckoning call so i cuddle up
    wrap in my blanket until morning.
     
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    Terry and Billy were in the throes of passion. Legs intertwined, sheets snarled, sweat glistening. They were getting loud, too. Not just one of them, but both. Voices rising, they didn't realize it, though. Ascending to the top, the tip top....both screamed together.

    At the same moment, across the city, Curtis awoke suddenly from his deep sleep and sat up.

    "I have to get her back," he said to the empty room.
     
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    On the other side of town, Carla got up and closed the window. A little too brisk tonight, she thought. The chill in the air reminded her of a similiar night, the night she and Billy made love on the terrace. That night still makes her cheeks feel hot, so passionate, so intense they were. But now, it's over, and the only inkling of him that may still lay inside of her, is the one thing that might make him return. Once again, Carla runs to the bathroom, sick to her stomach, as she has been every morning for the past week.
     
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    But would he believe her? Someone had done that to him before--tried to get his commitment with a baby that never showed up. No, Carla told herself. If it's there then I just have to let it come and let Billy see himself in the baby's face. If it has Billy's one of a kind nose and almost orange hair the whole world will know who the daddy is. Billy has his DNA growing on his head as do all his brothers and his father. Funny thing if you walk up to a guy and tell him you've got twenty dollars that might belong to him and you think it does he won't ask to see proof but a life that comes out of his own loins he doesn't value as high as twenty bucks. Carla knew she had to think smart and get that Terry-able woman out of her man's life.
     
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