Black Poetry : Fine, Young but Dumb...By Dúbb'l yoo T (Google it!)

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Fine, Young but Dumb...

Fine,
She has my attention.

Young,
Mind is seen to be developing this picture
That she will use as her template
Her stencil
Her blueprint
Of life's set ways that she'll soon make
Her ways and develop to become
Woman.

But...
Dumb,
The right place is where her heart is
But she's looking left towardsHim.

Through her line of reasoning
Its clear he's there for the ease on eye from her external pleasing,
But fails to see that her
Mind and soul
Also needs teasing.

His life trade adds to the
Down fall of my black nation
Who are constantly chasing people like him
Away from this fast cash realisation
On that's just how it has to be...

Yet it wasn't the case for her and me,
Principles are born from marn
In all black parents eyes for all to see
And I saw them in mine
And she saw them in hers,
So what part of them did you ignore to see?

But I'm sure his heart is in the right place
And she says he'll change
As his trade life is not set in stone.

So after the "love" moans
Finished with a foreheads kiss,
He leaves before her mum's double shift brings her home,
Is she happy? Who knows...

But I guess
Everyone has there reasons
For not wanting to be alone...
 

$$RICH$$

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i can see it and know it some time it's that way in life
yep fine young but never dumb they smarter then we think
 

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