Black Poetry : Fine, Young but Dumb...By Dúbb'l yoo T (Google it!)

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    Fine, Young but Dumb...

    Fine,
    She has my attention.

    Young,
    Mind is seen to be developing this picture
    That she will use as her template
    Her stencil
    Her blueprint
    Of life's set ways that she'll soon make
    Her ways and develop to become
    Woman.

    But...
    Dumb,
    The right place is where her heart is
    But she's looking left towardsHim.

    Through her line of reasoning
    Its clear he's there for the ease on eye from her external pleasing,
    But fails to see that her
    Mind and soul
    Also needs teasing.

    His life trade adds to the
    Down fall of my black nation
    Who are constantly chasing people like him
    Away from this fast cash realisation
    On that's just how it has to be...

    Yet it wasn't the case for her and me,
    Principles are born from marn
    In all black parents eyes for all to see
    And I saw them in mine
    And she saw them in hers,
    So what part of them did you ignore to see?

    But I'm sure his heart is in the right place
    And she says he'll change
    As his trade life is not set in stone.

    So after the "love" moans
    Finished with a foreheads kiss,
    He leaves before her mum's double shift brings her home,
    Is she happy? Who knows...

    But I guess
    Everyone has there reasons
    For not wanting to be alone...
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    review the poetic etiquette at the top of the page...

    give love to other poets if you wish the same in return!!!

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i can see it and know it some time it's that way in life
    yep fine young but never dumb they smarter then we think
     
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