Black Poetry : finding truth

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everything moves about in a centripital mo-shun
    not bein able to keep up with
    the exact numbers
    my mind slips into metamorphosis
    merging thoughts with bouts of the soul
    mind patrol on high but finding nothin
    reaching farther into the cortex
    what's next
    nothing but a handful of darkness
    levels above each other smother
    oxygen and no wind
    gets in
    and the room appears black
    that's where the truth is stored
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa.


    i always say... sometimes to find the truth...
    you gotta dig deep!... now when someone
    asks me what i mean... i'll direct them here. :)

    thank you for giving life to my thoughts thru
    your words...

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hi-wa

    most def da truth lay within very deep
    in da stillness of darkness of da mind
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa

    *Bravo poet!

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2, ga, and rich...

    thanx for the input people. just ventin'
    again on a late evening flo.
    wanders of the mind.

    hw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thoughts for today

    free ya mind da rest will follow !:rolleyes:
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmm...

    Speachlees.
    I know this is a good piece though.
    Good work Poet!:toast:
     
  8. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preesha'cha rashad.
    thanx for listenin.
    i enjoy your words as well poet.
    keep up the work.

    hw
     
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