Black Poetry : Finding Distance

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finding Distance

    Dumb brothers it seem use some other means to try and
    Be cool but I drop bait when I operate in river fishing, man
    Still water run deep, thrill and slaughter freaks is my plan
    See magnificent but be different so I disagree with style
    Somtime pulling my pants up to enhance my luck with a pile
    Of chicks, look try do a great writes so I take flight with vocab
    Like Clint Eatwood a High Plains Drifter, my game differ in the lab
    Rhyme brisk and large lyrics discharge like a gun its hype and fun
    In collaborations I got obligations to rip shop in Hip Hop wearing
    Flip flops, no criminal passion but in general fashion I’m caring
    Life is a lame circus everybody has the same purpose be
    All you can be then die, want affairs with pleasures and no fee
    Wanna flow free this a tough game is like rough terrain bumpy
    And funky to drive over survive as a soldier not as a monkey
    Wear plenty ice and use any device to reach success it be
    The devil at sea level trying to drown and down my pride G
    Have to amuse briefly best to use chiefly rhymes to entertain
    And be a winner of fame go to dinner with dames and my aim
    Is to get some wet honey bun, from school graduated and that
    Calibrated my nice life like scales can’t fail so I prevail phat
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh...

    but is he a "dumb brutha"
    coz his style is unlike another
    or is he just a "dumb brutha"
    i mean
    is he cool in his game
    his rhyme scheme...are they lame
    WHAT IS HIS AIM
    does his river flow
    in and around the curves he wanna go
    and his words...are they for sho'
    would you have his back
    if he asks you to take up the slack
    ...show him where the real game's at
    would you do it like that?

    I MEAN...WOULD YOU BE THERE FOR A "DUMB BRUTHA"
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw not if he dumb whart good would it be?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yet well felt i hear ya
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich and baller thanksfor the critiques and props for real
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe some are just playing dumb? Keep the flows rolling rhymebad.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname thanks for the props for real
     
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