Black Poetry : Find a Flow With Meaning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Jul 30, 2004.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flow on paper
    are your thoughts at hand
    So tell me what you're saying poet?
    Take me to that land....
    So thatI can understand....
    I want to learn
    your many voices
    your choices,
    Where your loyalties lie
    The subject that makes you cry
    Poet, I really want to comprehend
    But it's like you won't
    let...
    me.
    in.
    Must you talk about the same thing again and again?
    You flow hard but it's the same words from the pen
    Like, chose another topic....
    Can you find another groove?
    Just expand your horizions?
    Oh, there's nothing to prove....
    Just hear me out poet
    I ain't saying nuttin really bad
    well,... I'm being blunt
    Try not to be too mad:)

    If one day we decide to set aside
    The pettiness that we both feel
    I'll be here, waiting to collab
    No bones about it, I'm for real


    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice respectable drop
    love da flava and meanings
    at hand and surely u can
    understand a poet's hand
    da style and creativity
    dis was very nicely written
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and the church did say... :coffee:
    AMEN
    The primary purpose of writing is to "communicate"
    Girl...I could just put my arms around you...smh
    This was awesome!
     
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    Very nice flow. Posed well too
    flow head on poet!!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    *Swaying wif my hand in the air*
    YES LAWD YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :bowdown: oh see sista you KNOW I undamastand :look: :D
     
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    Whoa, now that came straight, didn't it. Well, sometimes it should, and I liked that you could, and did. Keep flowing it, like you're knowing it.
     
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    Hey young lady
    Yeah I feel you on this. I've had so many people in my life who have had trouble opening up. Just keep gently tappin on the door, and your love will shine through. You're a lovely soul.

    And this was tight flowin!
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww....thanks fam for all the love:love: I:heart: all ya'll:D
     
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