Black Poetry : Finally

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, May 19, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its been…
    2 years
    1 month
    3 weeks
    Since I felt your touch
    You kissing my lips
    whispering in my ear
    Loving me down
    Sending me to ecstasy
    And back again
    just holding me tight
    Here we go
    Claiming love…..
    Once more

    Reaching across the miles
    As the months turn
    Looking in the future glass
    All I could see was
    You and me
    Me and you
    Forever and more
    To that first year
    It grew longer but stronger
    I never gave up on
    You
    Us
    The togetherness
    Your grace
    My joy
    Your love
    My peace
    Our happiness

    Never ask for that big house
    A small one would of done

    Nothing was the same
    As we said that last goodbye
    And your lasting touch
    Forever remain on me

    Never question your love…..
    And we could of had it all

    Never ask for a diamond ring
    Didn’t need your last name

    The crying and the heart felt pain
    Of being without you
    I cant live through it another year

    Finally

    Apart but near
    As we start from the end
    to birth a new beginning

    Finally


    can we get it right this time…

    (C)2004
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    After 2 years, 1 month and 3 weeks (but who's counting) I know dang well somebody better get it right...and I know you will. the second time around will be heavenly bliss...go for it. Nice work of art.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    after all dat timing and crossing it can't do nothing but
    get right dis time .......tyte drop sistah
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nice, sis, very nice. I sure hope it all works out for you. :D
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY nice drop, sista :roll:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...this was so heartwrenching
    sister this was felt on so many levels
    sometimes it takes the second time
    around to get it right...good luck
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know where this one come from
    thanks for the love and support yall
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa. You took me down my own memory lane with that one. :blush:
    Great capture.


     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks glad you likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May I please experience that with you ma? Gorgeous
     
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