Black Poetry : Finally...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by liquyd, May 7, 2004.

  1. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love Found Me

    Waiting
    Hoping
    Longing
    Smoking
    Feeling lonely
    Affirmations precise
    PATIENCE
    Meditation
    Dreaming YOU
    Libra music
    Visionary
    Women love you
    I DO TOO
    Astrologic forecast dim
    but
    Pisces conjures spell
    A new
    LIFE
    Changing
    Dreams of babies
    Thoughts of maybe vowing to...
    This day
    Ever
    Leave you
    NEVER
    Remember I asked for YOU
    Thanking GOD for
    HIM
    So perfect
    Hold me
    'til the
    End All Time
    Precious
    Rhythm
    We in step with
    Body
    Spirit
    Conscious MIND.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is great!!
     
  3. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well thank you:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done wow!!
    flow on poet
     
  5. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks
    :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome and much love to ya on this tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the quick rhythmic pace of this stream of loving thoughts.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Oh, how beautiful this is!

    I loved the highlighted line the best!

    Very well done and I am so happy for you!

    And :birthday: my Sister Pisces!



     
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