Black Poetry : Finally.... Your Existance.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, Nov 6, 2004.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just as i was beginning to leave,
    you hopelessly spoke those three evil words,
    maybe this, this could be a dream where the visions are
    in complete distance, you are inclined to my
    ever- so- complicated mind...

    you said you loved me when i thought,
    this could be everlasting alone,
    you woke me up with the stars in your
    eyes, love filled and the absence of regret.
    You constantly occupy my mind, silly child,
    but why must your stubborness grow...
    when i ask you to leave?

    Higher my skies become and bluer they become
    when your sweetness is in existance,
    kind flow of words play tag with my
    sanity (i think i may be losin it),
    my pastor in the philosophies of love, life
    and intimacy.

    Finally the intense is no longer there,
    finally the hatred has freed itself from my zone,
    finally the regret speaks kind words because finally...
    Your existance is here...

    You are near.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You gave us heartfelt feelings deep enough to swim in poet. Flow on, this was beautiful.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com
    enjoyed the flow
    very heartfelt flow

    come check us out in our very own
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    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!
    welcome within the poetic family
    dis was deep and felt nice scribe
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: Very nice drop
    :hearthis: Keep them coming
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is tight keep'em cummin
     
  7. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam, glad you liked it!!!

    :D
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome plain :wave:
    I dont think i eva really said hello lol
    so.."heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey :wave: " :D lol
    ok now that we got that out the way
    welcome home i am sure by now ya know that the kool aid is in the fridge
    the chips are in the pantry
    dont take the couch wif the big cushions cause thas my seat i will sit on you lolol
    and of course...we are all so glad you are home :)
     
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    re: Finally

    Very lovely poem.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful scribe..very start to finish
    i really enjoy how you flow

    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:

     
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