Black Poetry : Finally.....we talk

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mkhaya lo', May 27, 2002.

  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have been waiting...but not in vain as opposed to anticipation.
    we've spoken but never really talked.
    I was afraid you'd see me. And you did. and you liked me.

    The hours we talked seemed timeless...
    it felt like we are never introduced, but reunited...
    and now, we get to know each other again.

    I don't know your experiences but I know what they've done to you...they've made you stronger.

    I love the way your not afraid to go through tough times. struggle makes a man stronger.

    You are stronger now...stronger for all who need your strength.
    I listened to you get deep into your past you were not afraid to answer my inquisitive questions. I know it wasn't easy to tell, but u let me into your life, pain, your joys, hopes and future.

    Our conversation was like a walk, a long overdue walk, down avenues and roads and drives, up the hill..down by the stream.

    the wait is over. The journey begins....
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...i think that it is so beautiful when you can finally find someone who does all of those things and much more. and when you can also, open up to them and share with them how much you have grown, as well. that's exactly when the journey has begun. i am really lovin' this piece...very nice. keep on scribin', i'm watchin'.

    ~~~letitflo~~~
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you...I hope I've really found a friend..

    lo'
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it can be so beautiful, feel so wonderful, when hearts reach out to touch one another...and being able to really "know" another person, is a gift...

    k
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like u have something good ....it's beautiful when two
    can come together like dis in such sweet moments
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully and stylishly written!

    Well done and well written. You told a story , but you also painted a picture. It was absolutely awe inspiring.
    Thanks for sharing.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    oh, this is what I'm talkin bout! A conversation is like a long, winding, intricate....walk.... that turns into a beautiful dance as the journey begins...

    feelin like all up side my soul! yess!

    :heart:

    Alyce
     
  8. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You all are too kind!!!!....I'm praying I have something good here..though I must admit it still needs time to be nurtured and allowed to grow..

    lo'
     
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