Black Poetry : Finality

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was never any doubt;
    I was able to discern
    even through the clamoring
    echoes and thundering rain...

    I read your lips through the
    haze..
    words formed fluidly,
    and for a moment I fell
    weightlessly through the moment,
    conscious of nothing but pure euphoria.

    But the full heaviness of the words
    slaps me across the face with violence.
    And my world looses noise and falls asleep
    with silence.
    The beat of my heart stopped and
    breathing stood to one side, out of my view.
    The words came and finally exploded
    in my ears with a cacophony of
    power and finality.

    "I Don't Love You!"

    D***! What can a man like me do?

    Copyright 2004
    "Son of the DayStar" Publishing
    "Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit!"
    “Poets are born, not made”
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing left to do , dis was off da hook fo real
    ya creativity is beyond compare whewww!!!!!!
    flow head
     
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    ok now..this was off it..
    tight drop!!!
     
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    Much love my man. I thank you and I love you! Be easy
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ma. You always leave me feeling real inspired and good!
     
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    *smh*
    The way you do
    what you do is a
    creation by natural right!

    Outstanding!!!!!!!!!!

    Loving it!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thank you ma for your love and support. God bless you greatly.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No matter how it's said, those words can never seem real at first. You delivered this with a fist. I felt this work of art.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate you greatly ma! You are truly beautiful and i'm blessed to have you in my life.