Black Poetry : finale

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, May 22, 2001.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am sooo not playing this game
    the slamming of a door
    the suddenly not talking

    you were up in me yesterday
    singing the tune of a happy man
    releasing all of your stresses inside of me

    but now we can no longer do the café thing
    cause you say i take you too seriously
    you’re a married man

    emotions are like a rash to you
    like a scratch to you
    like bleeding to you

    nothing turns you away more than need
    nothing turns me away more than denial
    it’s been almost two years

    the we have laughed and smiled
    that we have cried over losses
    the we have made love to our fantasies

    not once have you told me that you love me
    not once have you understood my pain
    a woman gives her heart to a man

    you pretend not to see it
    back to that rash again
    I am soooo not playing this game any longer

    lets see if you can play this one…
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Redlady,

    Nice piece!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    if you don't allow any cheating
    any second tries ...
    he'll have to play your game

    go 'head Gurl!

    glad to see you back on the page

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redlady

    I absolutely LOVE the way you state your case, sis! I remember "Lunch", girllllll...you sho have a way of brangin your heart and soul to the table!

    I like how you sound!!!

    Welcome back!


    a
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let me play devil's advocate...

    maybe he never says "i love you" because he don't
    maybe he runs from emotions because there aren't any on his part
    maybe he stops talking when you mention "commitment" because that's not a subject for his discussion.
    maybe he can't get into you the way you want him to because HE'S MARRIED.

    maybe.

    just the devil's advocate.
     
  6. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller

    Maybe he never says “I love you” because he can’t
    Maybe he runs from emotions because he’s a coward
    I have never mentioned “commitment” because I’m not a fool
    Maybe he can’t get into me the way I want him to because I’M MARRIED TOO

    Maybe

    Just the devil’s advocate
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    REDLADY YA HAVE TO UNDERSTAND U GOT ALL
    THE TOOLS HE NEED TO WORK WIT
    U FLOW RIGHT HEAD ON!!
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...

    then, let the devil play...and drown in the wonders of his pleasures.:) it's all good, redlady, as long as its good for you.

    peace&muchlove
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just flow head release this was posed well
    tight drop!!!
     
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