Black Poetry : Final Peace

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Inque, Aug 24, 2006.

  1. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    For everything
    I never knew
    And all of my regrets

    For what went wrong
    And what was right
    And things I can't forget

    For my mistakes
    For your mistakes
    And all the pain they bring

    For happenstance
    And never saying
    What it is I mean

    So easily
    It all comes down
    Around a weak foundation

    And that's the problem
    Isn't it?
    The cause of the frustration

    I wanted things
    You couldn't give
    I wasn't what you needed

    I never seemed
    To understand
    No matter what was pleaded

    But you never seemed
    To let me in
    And secrets damage faith

    What is truth
    And what is not
    Bears a heavy weight

    Perhaps I didn't
    Give enough
    Perhaps you didn't either

    So may be it was
    Both our faults
    And maybe it was neither

    Time, I think,
    Is everything
    It cultivates and kills

    It is what
    We didn't have
    And what we never will

    But change is such
    That cannot be
    As it was before

    And every change
    Is a key
    To open a new door...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was laid out sweet i agree surely will open doors to something new
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop poet
    we all make mistakes
    and are looking for that new start
    7/10
    uno
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inque:
    Poet this is really a nice piece.
    I can really relate to this.

    Much luv
     
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