Black Poetry : final love letter

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  1. TotalView

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    I am truly sorry for your loss.
    The depth of love expressed here is tremendous and has healing written all over it.
     
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    Healing...yes...for i love and believe. Thank you for your comforting words, I appreciate them and you.

    (smile)
     
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    sometimes...it's hard to step away from what was...into the unknown. it's not about letting go as much as moving on. neither is it always necessary to forsake one for the other. often, we cherish the memory of loved ones while loving others. is that a betrayal? i don't think so. we all have a past. it is that past that make us who we are...and who we are that attracts others to us. A LOVING PERSON LOVE THOSE WHO ARE CAPABLE OF GIVING/RETURNING LOVE. our past can confirm or deny that.

    enjoy this moment, yes. treasure your memories, yes. love life, yes.

    the river floweth.
     
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    Within self of thy love , it will forever be in the memories
    as it allow oneself to feel da depth of new love as mortal
    while inside immotal love is kept......loving both is truely good

    surely this heard by both in the most beautiful way.......
     
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    Dear Brother Poet Baller,

    I hear you and understand EVERY word...trust. I will always love and cherish my late husband's memory but I can't let it remain so prevalent in my heart that I continue to run away from any man who isn't him. If I want to find love I'm going to have to stand still long enough to let someone catch me.
    (smile)
     
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    ...loving both is truly good, yes. I pray they both not only hear me but feel me. For I love. Thank you for your beautiful words...always.

    (smile)
     
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    surely they both do feel you deeply
    one carried you with him while the other remain near holding you within heart
    so they both feel you madly and compassionately
     
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    Standing still.
    Feet firmly planted.

    (smile)