Black Haiku : Final...A Mother's Tribute

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Each day, a struggle.
    But then His gates opened up.
    Mom's final triumph.





    Happy Mother's day mom...I love you...I miss you.


    Copyright 2002 by Joyce Rogers
     
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    very beautiful...so poignant in 3 short lines...

    excellent!

    Alyce
     
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    A deeply felt Haiku.
    I love the comforting end.
    Thanks for sharing.



    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    she harvest within
    and triumph without like da saint
    marching at da gate

    brautifully pose'd and i feel da warmth of a mother within my soul

    love ya mom forever continue to walk beside me guide me wit honor
    and upmost respect to thy woman & Queenz of worth Thank u mom!
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich, for bringing this back. I had a bad virus that completely destroyed my hard drive. I lost this poem. I did not know it was still here.
    I really appreciate you finding it. It means a lot to me. My mother is deceased for over 20 years...and I still miss her very much at times.

    Joyce
     
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    mostwelcome sistah i feel ya my lost and open womb has never heal
    i miss her great speech and guiding me always their to tell me the right
    way and how to treat a lady a person and feel others feelings i miss her
    dearly and thank her for all the wonderful knowledge and days we had
    we shall be together again someday i know she will be waiting when i come
    peace sistah w/luv
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She steps through the gates,
    God embraces her closely
    His love and her's flow.
    She watches over her Joyce
    Love radiates from within.
    Warmth floods through your soul.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dior...That is beautiful...I do thank you. :heart:
     
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