Black Poetry : Filthontaminated---(lord,who Knew???)

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FILTHONTAMINATED


    I WALK CAUTIOUS
    BECAUSE THE STREETS ARE TALKIN’
    MY EVERY STEP FOLLOWS LIKE HOLLOW
    TIPS FROM CLIPS FILLED WITH SORROW-

    THIS IS, THE BEGINNING OF THE ROAD
    WHERE YA KNOW
    THINGS AIN’T EXACTLY WHUT THEY SEEM-
    WE IN THIS TO THE DEATH
    DO WHUT YOU PLEASE BY ALL MEANS-

    BUT, WATCH YA STEPS
    CUZ THE SNAKE LURKS AROUND EVERY CORNER-
    THE MAN IS WATCHING ALONG WITH A HAND GRASPING A CORONA
    CAN FEEL YOUR FEAR-TEARING YOU APART
    THE STREETS ARE BRIGHT WITH FAILURE, YET
    THE STREETS DO TEND TO GET DARK

    EMPTY BOTTLES OF LIQOUR
    BUMS WRAPPED IN CLOTH LIKE A TORTILLA
    FIENDS WITH CLOGGED VEINS JUST GETTING’ SICKA……
    LORD, WHO KNEW????

    WHEN THE BEEF HEATS TO A DEGREE,
    WHERE ITS FULLY COOKED-
    AND A BULLY GOT HIS GUN ****ED,
    READY TO PULL
    WITH AN EVIL LOOK---BLOW!!!!!!
    RIGHT BE-4 YOU KNOW IT
    YOU’RE NOW DOWN
    SOLDIER OR NOT –
    I KNOW YOU FELT IT……….

    SATANS PELLOTS
    WAITIN’ JEALOUS
    BREAKIN’ SWEATS WITH
    NO JOB OR NO INCOME
    TAKIN’ CHANCES –
    ITS HARD---BUT WE CAN’T HELP IT
    LORD, WHO KNEW THAT WE WILL SUCCUMB……????

    DIRTY SOTTERS
    MURKY WATERS
    FLIRTY DAUGHTERS
    THIRTY SOMETHIN’ FATHERS
    STILL THUGGIN’-FRONTIN’ LIKE WORTHY SCHOLARS

    I’M STILL WALKIN’---------

    FRIENDS DYIN’
    BABIES CRYIN’
    WOMEN STILL DENYIN’
    THE MATTER IS THAT THEY CAN’T FIND THE GUY WHO THEY WERE KUNIVIN’

    LADIES TOO FINE, AND
    HORNY FELLAS TOO BLIND, THEY
    PERCEPT THESE QUEENS AS OBJECT AND VIOLATE LINES,
    LINES CROSSED—MINDS LOST
    IN A SUBLIMINAL WORLD
    BRAIN RE-LOCATED TO PERGATORY IN HELL TOSSED
    ONLY FORC-ES OF GODSPELLS
    CAN UNITE YA MIND AND HEART AGAIN

    THE FIRST START YOU GET-
    WILL PROBABLY BE, THE HARDEST PART TO WIN-
    BUT NOTE:
    I AM STILL WALKIN’

    AND ALONG WITH MYSELF-
    NO ONES DOIN’ [email protected] ABOUT THIS-
    OR ALERTIN’ THE KIDS ABOUT THIS-
    JERKIN’ YA WITS WITHOUT THIS-
    ONLY HURTIN’ YOURSELF WITHOUT THIS HIT-
    LIKE A HIT FROM THE GUANJA
    THE DRAMA IS LIKE TRAUMA
    GETTING’ ALL MEDITATIVE LIKE DALI LLAMAS—
    FROM THIS---THIS………
    THIS ROAD I WALK IS FILTH-ONTAMINATED……………

    -LURK"DA KROOKED ONE"

    COPYRIGHT 2002:maddd:
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Lurk, you really sucked me in with this one! I was totally loving your flow and lookin' around for the mic! Go ahead wit yo' bad self. The message is loud and clear.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt here ......dis speaks loud flow on !
     
  4. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep vibin, Lurk this was sweet!
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel the energy from this piece, and feel your struggle within....yet this forum should be your safehaven to remind you REAL ONES do exist

    don't give up hope just yet...we will succeed!

    1luv
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RED-THANX LUV.....I WAS KINDA LOOKIN AROUND FO' A MIC ALSO WHILE I WAS WRITIN' THIS!!!!!

    RICH-GOOD LOOKIN' PLAYA!!!-I'VE BEEN FEELIN YOUR WORK TOO KIDDO!!

    FLAVA-THANX MISS NU JOISEY!!!LOL

    TWOFISH-I'M FEELIN THAT--BUT THIS GOES BEYOND ANY FORUM TABOO-
    THIS WAS WRITTEN A FEW MONTHS AGO--JUST THOUGHT ILL DROP IT TO SEE WHUT YALL THINK........U KNO????BUT THANX FO' CHECKIN IT OUT......1


    "u see,i am him,or who would be???"-----nas
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done poet
    you and your vibe are in good company here, we are all keepin our eyes wide open
    all three of them
     
  8. wildflower7

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    you right, no doubt.
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    letz bring it back a minute......................
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo you handlin'
    thru all the dumb sh*t

    feeling ya struggle

    because i know first hand

    DSS
     
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