Quiet Poetry Lounge : Filled

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Filled...
    With haunting hopes
    heartfelt sighs
    bated breaths
    and whimsical wonder whys...
    Filled...
    With smirks and smiles
    blush tinged laughter
    bubbly glee
    overjoyed ever after
    Filled with feelings from...
    my daughter's eyes, my son's smile
    holding a childhood friend's hand and skipping,
    and that favorite song that never goes out of style
    Filled...
    with a rush that's so warm
    it's a blanket that comforts during the storm
    At times I feel my heart is going to burst
    unsure of which emotions to describe first
    so that the impression will last
    And so, just want you to know
    It's much more than a whim
    that I'm filled to the brim, with...
    you....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like being filled to da top
    where sometime da heart will stop
    eyez well up in tearz
    from a warmth of love so dear
    filling from what is
    and all impression of emotion taken
    often a sweet rush takes ova
    when u filled of someone's lovin

    I love this joint Watz
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being filled becomes like breathing,
    the warmth, commonplace
    When love makes eyes dance
    And brings a smile to one's face
    It consumes one's essence, completely
    Filled with the love that's given so sweetly.

    Thank you so much Rich, glad you're loving this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes a filling so refreshing
    that carries you into a zone
    as the essence is consumed
    like bathing in da beauty of it
    so filling ......most welcome
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bathing in the beauty of it, yes indeed. Much appreciated Rich.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoaaa ...
    My heart was fluddering as I read it...whew...
    like at one time in space, you walked through my mind.
    It took brilliance to string these words together ...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well queent, if my words took you to such a place, then my words did my feelings justice. And your words, are so appreciated sis. Thanks a million.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow...such happiness to be filled with....watz....just a lovely piece...good to see you still here, sharing the warmth of your spirit.

    great write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a sweet response abstract. You're what I call a writers writer. Much appreciated.
     
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