Black Poetry : Fill Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by flo-real, Apr 7, 2005.

  1. flo-real

    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

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    Hey Baby
    You know I was thinking about how much I miss you
    And how good it felt last time we touched and…
    how I would love to feel that feeling again and more…See I really don’t know how to say this but …I want you to feed me…and be deep inside me-
    I mean to the point that I feel full… Full like – after eating a foot long Subway sandwich and some chips and a drink
    I mean full like I just had some Gumbo and some Greens
    Full like McDonalds Fries and a Wendy’s Frostie (Biggie Size)
    and some Dirty Rice from Popeye’s and a biscuit from Church’s chicken
    Full like a Twice Grilled Burrito, Macaroni and Cheese, and 2 Churros from El Pollo Loco
    Full like Chicken and Waffles form Roscoe’s
    Full like a Catfish dinner form Flowers Seafood and some cabbage
    I mean full to the point that I get “ittis”…you know what “ittis” is right…when you just get sleepy and want a good nap afterwards”
    …yeah like that
    Then after I wake up… I want you to hit it hard daddy…a lil harder…
    just a little bit harder…a little more… oow!. that’s good…now …

    BEAT IT UP…
    Beat it up like the bass line on a Dr.Dre beat
    Maybe even like an inmate beatin his meat
    Or like scrambled eggs before they hit the skillet
    Or Like batter for some cornbread muffins or pancakes
    I want you to beat it up like Ike did Anna Mae, when she said that all the songs sound the same…Scratch that, as a matter of truth
    I want you to beat it up like Ike did Anna Mae in the sound booth
    Beat it up like Tarver did Roy Jones in their last fight
    I mean like the symbols in a Neptune’s beat
    Or like…R. Kelly did them kids
    Beat it up like… the Ying Yang twins whispering through the whole song
    Or like DMX did that girl Keisha in “Belly”…
    Maybe even like Mr. Marcus did Precious in Jelly
    I’ll even settle for you to beat it up like Jodi did Evette…. And I’ll cook tacos

    But, baby if all that’s not possible …can u at least come over tonight?
     
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    Another real deal Happy Meal from Flo-Real!

    I gots to give you some hard hitting rep, baby!
     
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    Wow,

    Your ability has us in awe over here poet. Im only wondering were do you get such inspiration. Thank you for sharing.
     
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    str8 tyte joint here lovin it
     
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    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

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    To Godsoulja,

    my inspiration comes in so many ways! just daily experiences. I am not one of those poets who places poetry in a box what ever I feel like writing... I do!

    This particular poem came from a conversation I was having with my homegirl who is also a poet and we were talkin about sex and how bad we needed to have a fix! and we just started saying "I need him to be so deep in my gut till I feel full" so we started saying different phrases back and forth playin around! and I was like uh oh!! that's a poem!

    Thanks for the luv!
    www.keepitflowin.com
     
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