Black Poetry : Fill me with your love...... L.S.

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel like Eve right now
    I like how you breathe life into my lifeless body
    I feel as one with you Adam
    as we both have Paridise in our Garden of Eden
    Dust we are to dust we shall return
    But first fill me with your love
    Baby the first time I saw you I knew you could never be mine
    and the Second time I saw you I knew it was destiny
    Destiny led you to come back to me
    Even though you didn't know me
    Boy all I wanted you to do was to fill me with your love
    I like the way you smile
    The way you touch me is like 10,000 bolts of electricity running thru my body
    As your love is so electrifying
    Boy I felt at one time that love was dying
    But you gave me something to believe in
    Because you have given me love
    You've asked to become your lover
    and to take this level we share a little further
    as we both try to make it work
    Beneath your chest lies a heart that beats for me
    and underneath the lining of my skirt lies the beat
    that waits for you to passionately enter
    When our bodies entwined the passion that rise forth
    Has us both out of breath
    as you continue to fill me with your love
    Baby I am so glad to know that love has and will forever be in our corner
    World he asked me to join him as I am to become Mrs. and Mrs. I shall be
    Your Queen promises to treat her King with all due respect
    I humble myself before you my King
    Because noone will or ever come between this spiritual level we both share
    I need you
    I love you
    Would never put noone above you
    as you continue to
    Fill me with your love...........


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    Nevar112/Lavette112
     
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    This was so endearing nevar, this flowed with the gentle breeze of love. Beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the warmth the passion the love inside this was so endearing to a soul
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man sista nevar

    this piece is fire

    and i'm happy for you

    if it's real to life

    you deserve all the best
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thank each and everyone that has showed me love on this piece.........
     
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    part two follows........
     
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    Yes this was a very beautiful poem. I especially like the first few lines.

    "I feel like Eve right now
    I like how you breathe life into my lifeless body
    I feel as one with you Adam
    as we both have Paridise in our Garden of Eden
    Dust we are to dust we shall return
    But first fill me with your love"


    Great poem
     
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    Ditto! Awesome piece!
     
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    Hi Sis
    Wonderful piece. I enjoy the gentleness
    of how your lines flow. Very delightful indeed.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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