Black Poetry : Fill Her Up!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FeLoNy, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. FeLoNy

    FeLoNy Member MEMBER

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    .:Fill Her Up!:.

    I want to fill you up to the brim
    intimacy 50% him for her, her
    for him...

    sips turn to slurps, slurps turn
    to gulps, now Im drownen...

    ...in your love as Im pounden
    the round end,
    sounds are sounden so
    seductively sweet,
    no interuptions for weeks
    as I suck every drip of juice
    that leeks...

    squeeks turn to moans,
    moans turn to shouts...

    shouts turn into pouts
    as I display surtain tricks
    with my mouth...

    drips turn to leeks,
    leeks turn to splashes,
    time freezes as your peek
    passes...

    intimicy 50% her for him, him
    for her,
    your glass was half full untill
    I filled it to the brim...

    ...and stirred
     
  2. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felony.. u gon' get in trouble wit' me writing this seductively sweet poetry!!! mmmm mmmm good.... I really liked ur flow on this one.. as always Wonderfully expressed Poet!!
    1 Love
     
  3. FeLoNy

    FeLoNy Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Diimond...that was my intentions...700

    "flow on flow on
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** nice work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    drop it hot & extreme do yo thing !!
    like how u vibe ..............
     
  6. FeLoNy

    FeLoNy Member MEMBER

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    Thanks alot for the replies...yall really maken a brotha feel at home

    700
     
  7. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fill her up

    word! that's all i have to say 'bout that...
     
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