Black Poetry : Fighting Temptation!

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  1. ReeseCup832

    ReeseCup832 Member MEMBER

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    Fighting Temptation!

    As we lay, he cradles
    to the curves of my body
    in a bed soft as feathers,
    draped in cherry clothe,
    encrusted with rose petals;
    manufactured for lovers to be.

    He breathes
    steadily against the surface
    of my skin; gently I hear him.
    His lips cautious, his shaky hands
    pondering to touch me.
    I shuffle, lay placid, and
    then I am reshuffling again,
    so my head can rest upon
    his chest and listen
    to his heartbeat’s cadence.

    Our bodies
    join as
    one without sin
    as he rest his head
    upon my chin
    and guides his lips slowly
    to grace my forward
    with a kiss.

    ~*~Reesecp~*~ :blowkiss:
    Copyright © 2005 Adell
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There comes a time when we learn...never to fight the feeling.
    wonderful piece poet.
     
  3. ReeseCup832

    ReeseCup832 Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Queen for the advice and support

    God Bless
    ~*~Reesecup~*~ :)
     
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    The words in this lover's tryst lay soft and easy, and flowed ever so smoothly. Wonderful write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no need to fight the temptation of love and warmth
    i felt the wholesome of his drop sweetly laid out poet !
     
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    re: Fighting

    Very nice write.
     
  7. ReeseCup832

    ReeseCup832 Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Watzinaname and poetrymama for your positive input. And thanks Rich, glad you felt this one. I'm learning to just let things flow.

    ~*~Reesecup~*~
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a great write!!!
     
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    Very Nice, yes indeed
     
  10. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .....mmm nice


    nice read :read:


    with a cup of chocolate...





    o man ...

    kissing....




    i forgot what that is.... :laugh:





    realy..





    what is that kissing? :laugh:










    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
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