Black Poetry : Fighting Fire with the Flames of my Fist

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Innerve the habit to the deepest of my soul
    Break all the Rules so you feel in control
    Monument the pinnacle of the character collapse
    Cry a blood soaked tear to quench your relapse.

    Right-minded people will break into rage,
    And fight for their lives to their dying day.
    Total mayhem breaks in every street-
    From a fire you caused with a lack of heat.

    Stay calm lullaby. Were approaching revelation
    Introduction to a renaissance based on salvation.
    We all want to be spared from this evident demise
    And it’s all your fault that we say our goodbyes.

    Dead as the leaves that just turned dust-
    Is the society you killed with your fist of lust.
    No one will know what came of this place,
    They will just look back and see a smirk on your face.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fire rules...this is a wonderful piece poet, it said a lot, thanks for the write up
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good lawd this is tight, sis! And what a message. I am vibin this madly.
     
  4. 1Greaterthan~I

    1Greaterthan~I Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very tight. Staccato was off the hook. :welldone:
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this scribe was madd nice, i loved the message, flowed well.

    keep it goin

    SCW :cool:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very on point and tyte drop of awesome heat of fire
     
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