Quiet Poetry Lounge : Fifty Fifty

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cuvriefloesta, Dec 23, 2003.

  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now you not my man
    You're what I call a fifty fifty

    You got a fifty chance of being out of plans
    and fifty of being with me

    fifty of being Mr. Right
    fifty of Just Plan Wrong

    Fifty of being right here
    and fifty of long gone

    see i aint no mathmatician
    so I'll let you work it out

    but I can tell when the dice are loaded
    so don't try to play me now

    See you can't pull out an ace
    if all you got are duece

    cause I'll rewind that joke like Comic View
    and call you out like Big Bruce Bruce

    See right now you not my man
    you what I call a fifty fifty

    cause you got a fifty chance
    of being a change in plans
    and fifty of being with me.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    50/50 chance to be or not to be
    love this scribe u see tyte drop 100%
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...
     
  4. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$Rich$$ and Mzblk...not just for this one, but the other 50 you read too :hammer: smile!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed ya most welcome
    just giving love as it's due
    loving ya scribing
     
  6. Ujima

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    I know that's right! You kept it real!
     
  7. watzinaname

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    I really enjoyed this read and the crafty way you posed it.
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :Heart: this.
     
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