Black Poetry : Field of Dreams

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 24, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On a street somebody runs
    If you build it they will come
    Overrun with drugs and paraphernalia
    When it's cold our hearts are done...

    WE'RE THROUGH!


    Me and you nobody knows
    Human beings clothed in
    Life' hand me down
    Making rounds 'till kingdom come
    On the ground to meet God's Son

    Field of Dreams
    God sakes alive...

    Forsake money on some 9 to 5
    War and weapon playa' die
    Sacrificed by Whitey's lies,

    TOO SOON!


    Yahweh, fathered humble scribes
    But I'm a man until I die ~

    Elite minds are hard to circumcise
    Here's a grip of masculine pride...

    ***** YOU!!!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :slingshot
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well then .......guess all heard dat !
    speak on bruh !
     
  3. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow i loved this ****. u ended it powerfully, and the legnth of it was just right.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Suprised me at the end! Keep flowin!
     
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    I likes this drop....flow heard on.... :smooch:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your witty style merged with the potency of your words.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another great one...flow on brutha...flow on
     
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    re:Dreams

    Well go ahead you little militant. I like. :thinking:
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop here let it be known what the truth is.

    What you know is what you flow
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellently expressed my brother. Such emotion conveyed in this piece.
     
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