Black Poetry : FIBERLATOR OF LOVE (Distance shores)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    You became my center stage of fiber,
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    my heart confessed its thoughts to the wind
    My love beckon of you in da moment of call.

    I could feel your smile from a distance
    with the touch of your warmness profound me deep.

    The sun reached behind da cloudy sky,
    so the moon would arise da glow from
    darkness, brightened by the stars above,
    leaving upon the blue waters
    a shimmering portrait of your face pictured perfect.

    with all your savoring sweetness,
    tenderly pierced the walls of my soul
    as you capture a new tapestry with
    the golden pillowz of your warmth and love.

    Yesterday you offered me da power,
    today you endowed me with your strength.
    Every moment together, a treasured gift.
    Every day a celebrate life beside you.

    How lovely the music of your heart I hear
    You are the air and sound wave dancin to me
    and the spirit that gently moves my soul.
    I don't wish for the moon, I have the "stars"
    In you for all I ever lone.
    May I advance inside your world .
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    If I were "waiting to exhale," THIS would give it to me!

    Makes me just wanna go, "Ahhhh."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    How sweet of you and the warm love you give upon my artistic splash of waves
    i am humble sister thank you so much for your time and praise sista Cherryblossom

    Now exhale............. smile
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sir Richness... Wow!

    This beautiful arrangement of words twirled around in my mind, made my heart flutter
    and as the last word dripped from my lips, I was left with an extreme sense of satisfaction.
    My favorite verses,

    Boy, I was all between those lines and loving the way it felt reading them!

    An awesomely romantic piece!


    feelin'itsouldeep!

    Coco:dance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe.....Thank you sista Cocobutterskyn ya making me blush !!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Going through da motions of love in da spinner of da fiberlator by afar i see within and deep
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very romantically posed....

    ...confessing thoughts to the wind


    I know all about that......


    beautiful write.
     
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    triniti424 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you just overflow with the romantics dont you brother Rich :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Written with that romantic flair, and a determination to see it all through, and the visuals were dreamy poet.
     
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    sweet apple*pie ........where u been ?

    Thank you for the warm visit and humble love on the fiberlator
    yes seem like we both know this well......smile sis