Black Poetry : Fever

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fever...

    Burning
    Agitation
    Sweet delirium,

    gasping and rasping
    in need of breath and
    release.

    Something potent and
    strong in my system,
    no cure for this flame.

    Baby, gives me fever.

    Delicious
    restlessness
    turmoil
    flush
    frenzy
    and a heightened gush.

    Exotic and **** near erotic,
    this feeling of flu-like inducement
    in my blood lines,
    emptying my mind
    and clouding my eyes,
    I'm only focused on you.

    Caresses of liquid fire
    and whispered words
    that flame and never die.
    My salt is delicious with your sweet-N-Low,
    Your lips upon mine causes me to
    burst and glow.

    My soul creeps outside of me,
    on fire with a pivotal desire
    to burn myself flesh and soul in your fire
    your my keeper,
    satin doll your love gives me fever.

    Ecstasy
    Excitement
    Intensity
    Fervor
    and soon to be my griever for the
    sweet passion you cause and the fire in
    my blood stream,
    when you become my fever.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne Publishing"
    ~Dark Wynne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hotttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!
    da fever in ya heart path very well done
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most definitely. This is how I need to be when the right love comes to
    me. One love pa
     
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    Indeed the kind of fever I desire
    Desire so hot it burns like fire!


     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    this was hot
    likes the drop
    flow on...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. mistaliberator

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    DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

    I MEAN THE DROP WAS TIGHT BUT THE WORD PLAY THE WORD PLAY WAS CRAZY
    M
     
  7. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much love. I apprecieate it.
     
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    I'm loving this poem it was super hot
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now l'm keeping my eye on you...

    tyte!!
    jh.
     
  10. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both for your love and J i'm looking forward to hearing and seeing you around. Thank you for your love once again.
     
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