Black Poetry : ~~FEVER PITCH~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **Just messing around with words as usual and striving to describe how i'm feeling at the moment *smile* Peace and Soul family.

    I
    call it
    my
    Black Haze.

    Hued in rich marroon and dark gray.....

    I
    cease to be
    in my calm state.
    Instead my body...
    wrecked with desire and arousal...

    Something animalistic this way flows....
    and if flows from within me.

    Breath baby, breath!

    Take in that extra air and try to calm down.
    Will a cold shower work?
    No effect and I'm still on fire.
    Blood racing,
    heart pacing,
    and my thoughts chasing...
    I'm a man consumed by desire and it soon
    crescendo's to a Fever Pitch.

    Is there something wrong?
    Do I feel alright?
    Man, its perfectly natural to have this response.
    I'm not sexually repressed,
    but I don't necessarily go all around and infest.
    I'm on chill-mode like whoa,
    relaxing and non-taxing any of my strength.
    Silently hoping that this burning, this brimstone within
    will chill and let me have some peace.

    Well, there's no ebb to this flow,
    no wanning of this wax.
    Its here,
    I'm here,
    No fear,
    Just raw, pent up passion here.
    I chill and try to write it off without a hitch.
    Its a thing called arousal and a jigga like me
    can't escape the
    Fever Pitch.

    Copyright 2004
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yours is a great love affair with words.
     
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    re:Fever

    Nice play on words.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop of love wit tyte words cascading
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much poet. You are truly a blessing.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for your love. God bless
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much bruh. As always you are such a blessing.
     
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    Brother you may be playing with words but u were working this flow! :kickball:
     
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    ...I like it :D
    plain and simple...
    ...trying to get my
    "arousal" of these words
    under control...

    Oneluv,
    Sage
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love and peace to you bruh python. You keep turning out those verbal masterpieces.
    Love.