Quiet Poetry Lounge : Fertile Formula

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Jun 17, 2001.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I closed
    my eyes
    and saw.....
    flourescent patchwork

    this connection
    to the infinite cosmos
    .....pinpoints
    to the center
    of pupils

    between blinks
    suns...... sink
    on her
    next
    i n t a k e of breath
    ushering in Autumn....her words
    accompanied f r e e r a d i c a l s
    as varied as
    fall colored leaves
    blowing trees sound..s e r e n i t y
    seas pound...p e a c e
    waves wash up
    messages
    from the "ambiotic ocean"
    I lounge in
    embryonic motions
    basking then
    flash -flooding
    through....
    ..N2 ...crystallized canyon walls
    from
    foam tips
    of
    white water rapids
    I study her
    ribbons of elements
    properties of hidden precious
    minerals
    amidst her whole continen-tal
    divide
    I crash and slide
    evaporate and die
    only to fall
    upon her length
    again
    and again...

    cleansing her skin..
    washing her face
    quenching the thirst
    of her bounty
    that gives

    me.....

    A I R

    ...to
    breathe.

    Does anyone out there ...

    S E E

    Eye flow N2 her infinently....

    gladly....




    I + N2 = see x three


    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    Be YOU ti Ful .... is the music you sing!

    I see what U think
    and then I exhale ~
    in the only way I know...

    Writing symbiotic
    ligatures
    as abstractions
    just between you & me...

    bold-ly staccato

    and your words
    dare me to dream!!

    On the real...You gotz my vote too!



    :love: hey hey hey--- we're vibin' maaaan!! :wink:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMMMMM!!

    DES IS DA BOMB!!
    BLOWIN IT UP!! WIT A BANGGGGG!!

    I LOVE DES HERE :toast:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] $$RICH$$

    (Gypsy's got a sista smilin' Rich) He's just that damned GOOD~!!

    :wink: :wink: :wink:
     
  5. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Work it out!!! Work it out!!!

    Yep...I'm a let Gypsyman and N2 Work it out. Cause dhis be dha bomb...and girl his words are strong.... Meant only for you...;)
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Neak Neak ~

    This brotha's wordz are TYGHT to the nth degree!

    I had to hit him with "Earth Blue" ... as a come back ~
    (if he keeps it up, I'll be tryin' to fly on down to where he is to see him :lol: :wink:
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well N2

    You work dhat on out. Ain't nothing wrong with a little vacation...and it sounds like it'll be worth it... ;)
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo

    loved the art work here

    definitely a hot piece

    keep the flowin growin
     
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