Black Poetry : Feminine Wiles....revisited

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :confused: You claim you love me, but...
    ..You're not in love with me~
    Want to/don't want to make love with me...What??!...
    ..Must you always pull away~
    When "I" try to touch you...
    ..Maintaining a British position of stiffness~
    When you give me permission to hug you!

    :( It's as though "FEAR" runs rampant through your being...
    ..At the mere thought of "MY" coming close to you~
    And you never, so it seems...
    ..Give any consideration~
    As to how it has me feeling...
    ..Like I'm the "ONLY" culprit causing it!

    :maddd: Now, if such is to be the case...
    ..Why the phukk are you always up in my face~
    With your bullshytt laced caresses and touches...
    ..The batted eyelash come on~
    Truly you're in need of some lessons in sincerity!

    :eek: The messages you're sending...
    ..Are bereft with extreme dichotomy~
    It would be better, for me at least...
    ..For you to just dismiss me, send me away~
    Than to toy with my affections...
    ..With this so-called "love game" you continuosly play!

    SAARONCROWELL
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  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...Very Nice....

    Good comparison.. From a male and female's perspective...
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a good read!!!!!!!
     
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