Black Poetry : Female Enigma

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  1. Mndblwin

    Mndblwin New Member MEMBER

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    You make me want to lie when I see you
    Tell you the finest things in life
    Hey, I've got it if you give me chance
    I ain't gone lie, everytime I see you, I change my stance
    Jeans creased like I want, smile like I want
    Its something about your hair that seems so real
    I'm insecure as hell because I know it takes more than me to have you.....
    I'm in college but no degree or mastery can inform me of what you possess
    You've got me thinkin of the parts of the female anatomy that I've kissed only while........not sober
    Practice makes perfect, and I need you to take me to perfection
    We can lay in the grass and watch clouds make love
    Have our thoughts dance in harmony as we forget about the logistics of our pain
    Percipitating emotion down avenues of synergy until our hearts erupt with purity
    I don't know maybe dreams do come true
    I got smoking habits that call, drinking pains that never stall
    But with you I'll change, hell, I'll change my name
    I just can't figure out what has this spell on me
    I guess its just part of the female enigma
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Mndblwin, :wave:

    This is a tyte piece!! I am so loving it!! Great flow!!

    Welcome to Destee!!

    I hope to read more from you!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    hey dis was beautifully sprayed .............
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    happy u join us in scribes welcome from above :)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Mndblwin
    welcome :wave:
    this is a wonderful
    flow, feeling this
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME! WELCOME! WELCOME!

    And what a piece to start us out with!
    Feelin you in my bones! :laugh:
    Can't wait to read more of you:grouphug:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WeLcOmE :)

    :wave: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :wave: :wave: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :wave:

    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME

    :wave: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :wave: :wave: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :wave:

    lookin forward to read more like this :)
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Mindblwin,

    Even though I see that you've been on D's for a minute

    I'm still gonna say

    Welcome!!!

    :wave: :wave: :party: :kiss: :star: :rolling: :star: :kiss: :party: :wave: :wave:



    You should drop more knowledge like dis girl!!!
    Cause dis piece just spoke to every inch of me!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  8. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    That's whatcha call the "IT" factor.

    We can't say what "IT" is but we know it's SOMETHING! lol


    Nice piece!






    And :birthday:
     
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