Black Poetry : Felt A Vibe then Stroked My Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Jan 23, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the pen is pressed to paper
    Watchin' the gleam in the corner
    of your eye

    Dry the tears of a reader's fear
    with the intro of my vibe

    Scribe about those memories lasting
    Kick game true and forever sure

    This be some serious DEF POETRY
    As they applaud and yell for more

    Prose'n deep in verse in G-major
    Add that Q to make it really tight

    Stylin' with my mental flow of BIC-ink
    To bring your hearts & souls to light

    Stroke 'em heavy just like they like it
    This poet has no limitations

    When my work is felt and realized
    They'll be no room for hesitations

    As the flow becomes a downpour
    And the snaps suggest a hit

    It's right then you know they're ready
    For some free-styled spoken spit

    The poetry begins to transform its figure
    The crowd is hyped and hella psyched

    Every poet has a duty; my task?
    Convert my tongue into a mic

    Hear the passion in my delivery
    The vernacular's down to mouth a 10

    And to think this all just started

    when I felt a vibe
    then
    stroked my pen!

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ

    da feeling u felt was poetic justice
    u scribe a vibe of notions in a motion
    that stroke ya pen to canvas....tyght man!:D
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    hahaha... this is hella cute! & ALL you!

    (at least i can breathe this time!! :lol: )

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
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    Stroke it baby!!!

    You got mad skills brother!!!:)
     
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    Dog!

    Man I would love to hea you recite this joynt!!!

    Crazy Flava Cuz!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    had to up this vibe again
     
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    Yeah, so tight this write...one that I would love to hear in the audio.
     
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    Much can begin as an itch to write, before you know it, a masterpiece has been created, then spoken. Great piece here.
     
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    GQ smooth!!!!!!

    this is hott!!!
     
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    gosh this poem placed a nice thought in my mind
    great flow poet.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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