Black Poetry : Fell In Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Nov 22, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He was a foot solider
    An urban hood warrior
    He stole my heart
    The first time I saw him

    I fell real hard
    And he caught my heart
    We are rarely
    Ever, ever apart

    Now he is my King
    I am his Queen
    Raising and nurturing
    Further Kings and Queen to be.

    The street smarts we preaching
    The book smart we teaching
    Not trusting anyone
    With they’re up bringing

    I say the path of love
    Has strengthens our heart
    Awakening a deep passion
    In motion, in thought

    He was a foot solider
    I was an urban dove
    Looked
    Turned
    Fell in love.
     
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    oh sister i love this..cant wait for mine...much love..
    this was sweetly laid...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    this was like da King and I
    da warm depth from this has me in a maze
     
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    thank you Sisters Olakuoto,mzblkangel for the love.:heart: feeling like a dream at times

    Hey Brother Rich The King and I one of my favoite flick....thank you for the love:heart:
     
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    this has got me wanting to fall in love:)
     
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    :) thank you Sis Swt..when you not looking for it...bang it comes:laugh: thank you sister for the love
     
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    aaaaaaahhhhhhhh nice. 4 every king needs a queen and every solder needs a love at home to come home 2.
     
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    this piece is so many things......sweet, tight, pretty, inspirational, touching.....lovin this, sistah. (and of course very very happy for you) peace
     
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    Hey caramelpython and every Queen needs a King :) :thanks: for the love:heart:

    ahh gempis:) you are always so sweet and kind..always bring a smile :thanks:...:heart:
     
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    Bluewater, Your approach to this unique encounter sounds creatively uplifting. It is nice for a change to give praise for someone close to you as you have done, these are the real tools to bring. Continue to build up your poetic flow for I will be watching.................G
     
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