Quiet Poetry Lounge : Feelings

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jul 9, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what do you do
    when these feelings
    ova come you
    take ya heart
    deep in the night
    make ya soul
    feel alright !
    what do you do
    with da emotions
    that seem to make
    a love explosion
    blasting to a desire
    something dat set off
    a blazzin fire !!
    what do you do
    when ya heart calls
    and feelings roll
    as a new chapter start
    and take it's toll
    how do you fold away
    when the feelings
    out to play
    what do ya heart say
    and how da mind lay
    i wanna know before
    these deep feelings go !? :idea:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you go with the flo
    shoot i dont know
    but i likes this flow
    come on give me some mo...... :jumping:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel as i seek answers before
    these feelings go hide !
     
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    What do you do
    when feelings cause chills
    a rollercoaster ride of peaks
    and valleys chocked full of thrills
    What do you do
    when the wind blows in a bliss
    that carries your thoughts from
    within, what do you do with this?
    What do you do
    when your heart skips a beat
    all a flutter from the emotions
    of an intense explosive heat
    What do you do
    what does the mind say
    what does the heart convey
    I wanna know
    Before the feelings go away

    I guess if you seek you will eventually find. Deep flow of feelings, tight drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz ........
    i guess da emotions
    dat flowz from heart
    like gold as warmth
    set in so feverish !
    i gotta journey to seek da answers.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    those feelings are
    so tricky...
    touching flow

    peace,
    Sage
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    how do you know
    when the feelings start to go
    when the heat no longer rises?
    how do you know
    what you should do
    when the river rages through
    and the love still feels anew?
    what do you do when the trust
    that should be
    leaves you instinctively?
    how do you know that
    that
    you've got to journey on
    learning as you move along?

    sweet rich...sweet
    when you keep asking the questions...sweet
    twas nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you know sage it's like tricky and deep roll in one
    thankz for the visit as i search on

    deepy...............
    da heart knows
    from da feelings inside
    but yet da mind reside
    the answers are near
    soon within touch
    i search high & low
    til i know .........Thankz for the drop and visit
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very, very sweet flow, Rich.

    And the input from my sistas mellowed me out. :jumping:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you very much indeed
    as i journey for reasons....Jazzy
     
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