Black Poetry : Feelings

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DestinyLove222, Nov 23, 2003.

  1. DestinyLove222

    DestinyLove222 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am in love with this guy
    but he don't know how I feel
    I want to show him I am 4 real
    But fear has me trapped
    I can feel deep down
    in my soul
    the call of love
    pulling me toward him
    Everytime I talk to him
    I get a bright smile on my face
    He lights up my day
    I feel he was made
    just for me
    I love him so
    He evokes feelings in me that he
    may never know
    unless i let go of my fear
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I will move this to poetry you placed it in discussion forum
    this is very deep scribe
    it flowed from emotions running
    nice
     
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    Is this poetry or a confession? I can't tell.
     
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    This is a poem.
     
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    very nice scribe
     
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