Black Poetry : Feelings of Love

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelings of Love
    captured
    in inexplicable moments
    enraptured
    in every bird I hear
    in every sunset I see
    it's only you dear
    What else could it be?
    Except
    Feelings of Love
    sparkling like diamonds
    in the star studded sky
    flooding my eyes with tears of joy
    Need you ask how, or wonder why,
    remembering the full moon
    reflecting upon me last night
    wondering if you saw it too, as you
    appeared within my mind's sight
    Feelings of Love
    As the last of the fall's leaves
    float to the frosty ground
    I feel the crisp wind caress my face
    knowing that you are still around
    for you are always there
    and there you shall remain
    permanently, indelibly
    saturating me, as the autumn rain
    showers me with it's soft caress
    I know these are
    Feelings of Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed the feelings that cascade into a love
    the feelings of pure love & warmth show nuff sis..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pure warmth and love create a heavenly embrace. Thank you brotha Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise most welcome sista
     
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    Yours is a rapturous love I feel, flow-on.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wonderful nature filled emotions...
    air, wind, rain, diamonds, tears, moon...all the elements expressing your feelings...of love...
    nice flow watz..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your support is appreciated Rich.
    Thank you for the kind response 1poet.
    Deepy, thank you for such a nice reply poet.
     
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    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You get outta my head pleassssssssssse.... hehehehe your pen was magic in that piece.... I enjoyed the read.... thanks for sharing .. Ms J
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm in your head, huh? :) Thank you msjulia2u for letting me know that I conveyed that feeling you hold for someone special.
     
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    ...to be so enraptured
    that everywhere you turn
    and in every...earthly and
    heavenly thing..."He is seen..."
    is truly a sign of the trappings
    of Love...
    for at this point...Love has
    broken ground...established
    its foundation and is erecting
    a monument, a great steeple...
    a castle...a home for the "He"
    that stands...above and before
    all others…


    Nice work sis…
    Sage
     
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