Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Jul 7, 2011.
Your words always bring comfort to my soul!
Thx. for sharing
My favorite lines were:
my pulse taking
my eyes smiling...
There's a therapeutic texture to this poem. Grace is a powerful virtue that is best digested after real life experiences. There's a brief stint of remorse and borderline shame that quickly gets replaced by a reverent gratitude. The subject of this poem accepts divine intervention and makes no qualms about why God does what he does...how he does it.
...this is just my interpretation
All in all...I enjoyed the intentional ambiguity.
Great work Kiwanda*
Thank you for always supporting me and my work. I respect your art and your opinion. Knowing you're reading, makes me dig deeper and strive to write better. It doesn't always work but at least I try. (smile)
Sister Poet Candeesweet,
Thank you...and for more than just stopping by and leaving words. Sincerely. (smile)
Thanks for the inspiration. (smile)
Brother Poet NittyGrit,
Thank you ever so much. When I see your name attached to my work, I smile before I even open the page. I generally am careful not to fuse the subject of a piece with the poet, but in this instance I am both...so...having typed that...just want you to know your interpretation is spot on. As for the ambiguity...I have no ax to grind. It is what it is. (smile) Thanks for stopping by and leaving words.
Thanks for typing my given name...it felt like a cyber hug. At least that's my interpretation. (smile)
you are beautiful.
continue your journey
the river floweth
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