Black Poetry : Feeling You

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling You

    There is smile that comes to my eyes when I see you
    It is light that shines, a warmth that takes over me.

    My mouth becomes dry when I look into your eyes
    My tongue wet them. As they glide across my lips
    I feel a hunger My lips are starving to be kiss.
    To taste the essence of your tenderness,
    of your juicy lips

    Your shoulders so broad and wide, arms spread out
    to enclose me.I lie in your arms and close my eyes,
    and take in the scent of You for a while.
    Being so close to you is so healing, inducting a
    Nice safe feeling. As I close my eyes and smile.

    I like that mental awareness that is between us,
    we know With out saying a word. The need of you,
    and I. Intimate Encounters, which has gone beyond
    the physical obvious attraction As I lie folded in
    your arms. Sensing you.

    Your hands caress my tender skins, and I try to come
    Even closer I lift my head high and look into your eyes,
    And your lips now cover mind

    Hearing the rhythm of your heartbeat. My head rise up and
    Down as you breath my body adjusting to your rhythm, and
    Our hearts are on the same beat. We inhale and exhale together.
    It is so soothing, being with you.

    Peace


    Vanessa Michele 2003
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh how i know this feeling... tyte flow...
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm lovin your vibe, Bluewater.
    tyte flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed blue dis was awesome flowin' sistah Queen
    let da pen speak on ......
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi poeticlyspeakin it is a nice feeling :thanks:

    feeling you to skrybe7 wonder vibes :heart:

    Hi RICH thanks for the love, nothing but love here :grouphug:

    Peace
     
  6. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummhhhh... beautiful, sensual flow... ain't nothin like being loved by someone who REALLY loves ya!!! :)... keep it flowing...

    peace
     
  7. Rico

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    the essence of you...is purely intoxicating!
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you NADIA*BINTA :thanks: it is wonderful

    wow..I am blushing Rico...mmm..nicee... :)
     
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    closer than close
    closer that most
    the love shared
    makes me want to brag and boast
    cause you are the butta
    to my toast
    the skateboard
    to my coast
    the rump
    to my roast
    when your away
    this memory haunts me like a ghost
    you're poem was so true
    this addition i had to post
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was lovely...
    sweet :love: is there in the air..

    much love liberty
     
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