Black Poetry : Feeling the RIDE

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Funny chance I met you
    this way
    positioned behind you
    holding on for dear life~

    For the life of me and of you...

    ...but I didn't worry
    about a solitary thing...
    knew you'd be careful
    for the both of us


    I tightly squeezed my
    arms around you
    as we reached speeds
    in excess of 100 mph

    Me leaning into you
    so that I could feel
    your heart beat
    on my chest
    and our
    soul's could connect
    learning morse code
    under the sounds
    of loud
    torques

    and I smelled your
    scent -- -- (Obsession or Curve)
    as we'd come
    to a slow turn
    and it sent me to heaven
    and brought me back
    with YouMeWE-wishes~

    Leaning
    in unison ~ together
    feeling the
    completeness of
    the 'road less travelled'

    We talked at
    stop lights
    and enjoyed
    each other ~

    Took in
    four glances of
    the day
    as the scenery
    sat still
    along the route
    you said was
    'just right' for me
    ~Highway 1; 69~
    a 'must see'

    20 + CVR's
    that surrounded
    us ~ all friends;
    riding for
    the same reasons~
    but mostly for fun... and so,
    we rode
    and rode
    ....and rode

    Oh.

    Funny chance I met you
    before today
    I didn't know much
    about the whole of
    your being, or even the
    sum of your whole

    ...and yet I held you so
    tight ~ for both -- yours
    and my life

    The wind blew so
    hard and that
    it brought your
    thoughts to me
    from underneath
    the ridge of
    your helmut
    and I began to
    read your views
    in my shield
    as I closed my eyes
    and resting my head
    on your shoulders
    and putting my
    arms around your
    waist (safe place?)

    Riding on a
    continous journey
    that lasted
    throughout the
    day and on into
    the dawn
    of the next

    Sharing commonalities
    similarities
    and the like

    Funny chance I met you
    and I like what I
    know thus far ~

    As the spring ends
    and our
    adventure begins
    I'm sure
    we'll collect
    memories to
    ride us through
    to the future

    ...and I'm looking
    forward to the
    next time I'll be
    feeling the ride
    on the back of
    the bike ~ driven
    by you.


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ma dear sista, you know that i have one word for this piece heyah...that word would be: tyght! yes, indeed, i'm lovin' it! keep on scribin', as i continue to watch, dear poetess.

    ~~letitflo~~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    List

    As long as you will keep readin' me sista friend.....then I will
    most definitely keep on writin'!

    Thank you!
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    beautifully written... about a beautiful experience!

    i hope you have many more of these "rydes" dear sister Queen!
    enjoy yaself & jus let it flow! :wink:

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Shyne~

    Most definitely enjoyed the experience and the ryde!

    Will do ~ thanks for the "girl talk" earlier...and for your
    listening ear -- it was appreciated MUCHO~

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  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    It is 3:05 in the morning at thie precise moment and what am I doing? Picking my chin up off the **** floor because this piece was definitely "jaw dropping" . I noted on another reply that the evolution of your pen has been "incredible", I am sorry that was the wrong descriptive. I have a better one "divine" like, straight from the heavens above. The read of a good piece is like a 75 degree in Minnesota..."You not gone see them every day of your life but when you do "bask in the glory of a blessed thing."

    I remember once I said think "outside" of the box, I'm not sure where this one falls but ****, queen can a brother open up the lid and see what's inside?

    "10" times infinity

    one love,blak


    :toast: I propose a toast (let's imagine in the mugs is 151) that May 13th is your day "N2UrSoul" day
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Why must you open the lid to see what's inside
    when it's alwayz been presented as a
    gift -- 'to you' to read slow enough for you
    to fully understand me......?

    I'm not quite sure?! I don't think I'll ever OVERstand...?

    But I do know this...

    I thank you for the comps on this piece of peace I've found......

    1 :heart:
     
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