Quiet Poetry Lounge : Feeling the Flow....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 5, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say it is better
    to give, then to receive,
    So what then, should I give
    to you before we leave
    this life. Before our reign is over.
    If I leave you my eyes,
    they would forever mirror
    wonderment into your soul's guise.
    If I leave you my lips
    they would always
    suckle the drips
    of your tears, happy or sad.
    If left with my hands
    you'd be left with my
    most intimate scribe,
    caressing our lifelong vibe.
    If I leave you my heart,
    it would permeate your mind
    leaving you awestruck
    at the depths of passion you'll always find.
    So what then,
    should
    I
    give
    to
    you...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this
    it was a nice drop
    :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblkangel, thank you for feeling the flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    giving is the key
    and yes u should
    in this life
    and hummmm
    even be called my
    wife
    but no need to keep
    it tucked away
    Nice flow dis was very smooth keep flowin sistah
     
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    very graceful

    i like that a lot
    fill there heart and fulfills what god has taught
    how he has taught us to be giving and loving

    nice flow
    much love
    Gen~Ethic soul
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, giving is the key, Rich, you thought it was smooth? Why, thank you...
    Thankyou for feeling the grace of the words, Geneticsoul.
     
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    holy crap, what an amazing concept. mass props to you for this, girl. great flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing? Well, I don't know gempis, it's just what popped into my mind at the time...Thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah u have a very nice vibe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd like to think that vibe is the true inside clawing its way out...thank you....Rich
     
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