Black Poetry : feeling of a dream....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    night have fallen
    I lay here...
    you
    over flow
    in my thoughts....
    time passes
    i have more and
    more questions
    in the core of my soul
    do i trust what i feel...
    is this a dream gone bad...
    how can it be real?..
    no one have touch me
    so deep and
    so strong....
    as you...
    the thought of you
    ignites like fire...
    in the depths of my being...
    the bond is so intense
    my dream have
    moved so close
    but still
    so
    far
    away....

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
     
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    i love it...
     
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    girl...i feel ya...i'm feeling this way right now...thanks for putting it into beautiful words. much love.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin...lol glad you love the read...thanks

    true love...you are so kind...i only can say thank you and your welcome...happy u enjoyed it and felt it...peace girl
     
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    da warmth of dreamin' i felt from dis
    i tell ya my vision was closed up in it
     
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    MY $$RICH$$
    glad you enjoy
    thank you for your read...
    much love
     
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    yes indeed i was all up in it too
    love da scribe
     
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    blushin....
     
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    How can one take over the whole of another. By flowing in their dreams.

    So as the night start falling. Dream of me. Take me in your sleep. It's so real. You laugh out loud, cause the feelin seems to be holding you so tight. You even toss in your bed. Positions change as we do in your dreams. You wake up sweating. Wow.. that was great. Close your eyes.. it's only half over.
     
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