Black Poetry : Feeling me?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Archival, Dec 17, 2005.

  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost in the rhapsody,
    as she traces my body,
    naughty,
    eyes closed,
    but she imposed,
    on my exposed,
    each, stroke,
    serves only to invoke,
    the passion she awoke,
    with a little moaning sound,
    as she plays around,
    with what she’s found,
    breath trailing down heat,
    to the sound of the beat,
    from my neck to my feet,
    no, halfway between,
    like a shot of caffeine,
    she makes the scene,
    with no need to go slow,
    dipping low,
    bringing me to plateau.



    Infrequently Soulful,
    Archival
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was hot poet
    Cool vibe to this flow
    Much Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems it was also you who was happy to be felt. Very descript expression of pleasure. Flow on then.
     
  4. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all.

    The little pleasures in life keep me up at night, but I'm not complaining. Sometimes it's nice to be able to just lay back, to better understand how deep her desire runs. Simple and explicit sharing of touch, no games or expectations, no right or wrong way. Hope your all in a position to understand.

    Anyway, had to flow and where better to drop a line. Always good to see the whole family still here. Things change and years go by, but Destee's place always feels like home to me. Even if I am,

    Infrequently Soulful,
    Archival
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as it was cascading out.....this was very nicely done poet
     
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