Black Poetry : Feeling Like That...(from Things on my Mind)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 27, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling like a ballon
    Unable to contain the air that swells it
    Reaching the point where it can no longer hold its form
    About to explode
    I'm feeling like that

    I'm feeling like a low gray cloud
    Heavy with moisture
    Waiting for thunder to give its signal
    Waiting for lightning to pave the way
    Then I shall rain
    I'm feeling like that

    I'm feeling like a canvas
    Awaiting the artist's brush
    Impatient for the strokes that will give me life
    I'm feeling like yellow
    Waiting for blue to make me green
    Feeling colorful
    I'm feeling like that

    I'm feling like Stevie Wonder
    Seeing so clear my heart and soul
    I'm feeling like a shooting star
    On its way to my love
    Almost there
    So close
    I'm feeling her
    I'm feeling like that

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel whatcha feeling...

    and let the feeling paint the picture of all dat. coz i'm feeling like i found the end of the rainbow...and, though, there was no pot of gold...i know that i'm rich in my feelings of happiness.

    feeling like a wonderful day up in hea.:)

    THANKS BE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I AGREE WIT YA

    FEELING THE EMOTIONAL MOTIONS
    AND EVEN IF IT AIN'T MINES I FEEL
    LIKE IT........HEARTBEAT WRITE DEM WORDZ MAN!
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    looking forward

    to reading more of your mind....

    a definite favorite.....well, you know :)

    thank you for sharing

    a
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I'm so excited..and I just can't hide it"..

    The words just keep running through my mind when I read this...

    nice Be, nice.....

    K
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bruce, this piece is simply beautiful.
     
  7. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets very much.

    BE
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and as I

    approach the table in the
    book store to have you
    sign my copy I'm feeling all excited
    as my yellow is mixed with
    my blue and a splash of grey
    a modest drop of red turning me
    a bright shade of abstract.....





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