Black Poetry : Feeling It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Jan 9, 2009.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Instrumental beats gone wild
    Blast’n musical vibes of the hip-hop kind
    Prais’n mankind thru soulful sound
    Of Lyrics experienced in realtime
    As Time on the wall tick tock
    I rock with my keyboard in hand
    Bobbin my head
    Listening at my surroundings
    Visiting me in the cubicle sweetly
    Caressing the ears
    And touch the mentals
    Physical situation and location
    Could be worse
    So I appreciate These problems
    Brotha wit a job
    They move me
    Heard the other day of
    Possible job loss
    Got freaked out
    Then said
    Who cares I’m free when ink
    Tells of emotional wave lengths
    Not felt before
    But levitated
    into awareness now
    Stimulating fingers to typing
    Whatever soul to mind dictates
    At any rate building line by line
    The feeling and experience of life…
    No strife just life
    When I type
    And any feeling thereof
    Nevermore will I quit
    Stick to it
    The flo that flows for flow sake
    Anybody can dig it
    Create it from within
    As music being made from scratch
    Being carried by wind
    words from the soul of the mind
    Patched together to form
    A Poetic montage
    to feel better at the end of the day
    release…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes release and let it be poeticly sprayed i enjoyed this piece here ........
    got me feeling it too
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad - This is inspirational on several levels. There is an inherent need to create and express ideas that start from scratch and build into something of meteoric value. We are as you say involved in Life not strife. I liked that idea of a "Poetic montage" and "Lyrics experienced in realtime". Makes me "Feel it" and thanks for this view through your poetic window. Namyh
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    great explanation on how to "release"

    music has a way of doing that, music has a way the vibration of music

    cools the soul

    really felt this part

     
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    YES...

    ...to all that you say...coz everyday finds writers writing those words they say...those games they play...in doing whay may come their way...and i say...GIMME DAT FLOW, everyday.

    write your worries away, poet.

    coz the river flows.
     
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    And what a montage you created. Love the way the musical and written vibes were woven together here. I can relate, much enjoyed poet.
     
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    very nice...Rashad

    Given my love for music & poetry, you have me feelin it...

    with your poetic flava, flow on...Poet.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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