Black Poetry : Feeling Blues

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  1. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the blues
    Pull through me
    Like the ocean breeze
    It was cool
    Knew it was you
    Remembered the last kiss upon my lips
    Hot
    Now cold
    Sighed boldly
    Knew it was good bye
    Knew it was not to be again
    I felt the blues
    Lost a friend
    Lost a lover
    Found loneliness
    Discovered how it came to this
    My heart hurts
    My mind skirts
    Undressing
    Naked in once a blessing
    What was once us gave me
    Indigo
    Midnight
    Dark
    No sky
    Blues
    And I felt it…
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Peace and Love!

    Feeling Blues


    Deep poetess, very deep:

    Naked in once a blessing
    What was once us gave me
    Indigo
    Midnight
    Dark
    No sky
    Blues
    And I felt it…

     
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    This piece said so much and made me
    look back at a momentin time when i felt this too....
     
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    I feel it too. What a deep piece
     
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    .......For real, welcome back Randee.

     
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