Black Poetry : Feelin' Sunshyne (For that Southern Peach of Mine)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Aug 13, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rhythmic beat of your warmth

    comforts my sense of self

    Your summertime rays radiates

    and generates a feeling of fondness

    just for the how, what, when, and why

    of you...

    Will you uplift and cradle my

    mind

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    as only you can do?

    With a soulful endowment of touch with

    eloquent speech; you stroke my

    hunger for your generous sunshyne;

    tepid against my brow yet warmed to

    my sensitivities; no one dare asks

    of the reasons I am inclined to caress

    this sweetest persona of

    SOUTHERN SENSUALITY

    as I do; it must be obvious

    Soaking up all of your affection with

    careful connection; a tie so strong

    it binds and fortifies two gravitational

    spheres; your shyne and my quality

    A masterful amalgamation of two souls

    bonding from within as one...

    Let me emphasize one more time

    that I recognize beauty being only

    skin

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    But true to its form, your beauty

    knows no bounds

    inside and out

    How do I feel Sunshyne?

    Let me count the ways

    Never numerically

    But through metaphoric

    dreams of her light that

    cast my nightmares into

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    N

    The sun"shynes" brightly on

    my face which displays the

    smiles brought to bear by her

    genuine show of caring for those

    she loves

    I am

    HUMBLED

    I am

    SECURE

    I am

    PEACE

    when I am feelin'

    SUNSHYNE!

    (C)GQInc 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sunshyne

    is just good fa ya! Period.

    Diggin this flo-etry GQ!

    a
     
  3. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    c
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    Your poetry echos pure love.. You must be the ladies man>>> I aint mad at ya...
     
  4. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving that sunshyne.:)
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    GQ and Sunshyne...

    what a good combination! LOL


    nice flow


    pd
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que....


    you eva seen a BlakGurl blush??...
    then come ova here quick! :)

    you took my breath away... & now
    i've been place on oxygen indefinitely!

    i could say a million other things... but
    you know how i feel about cha! :heart:

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    I knew there was a reason why they call you GQ...because only a GEntleman of Quality can write a piece so marvelous.

    blak
     
  8. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Flows. Very very very Nice.
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree...

    [SIZE=huge]...with Mr. Verb.
    There goes my
    favorit~est
    flirt
    , workin' his
    magic, yet, again;
    and, as you can-
    plainly- see, my
    big sis 'lovedid' to
    the point where
    she started to
    do this: :blush:[/SIZE]
     
  10. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G !!!!!!!!!!

    THIS DROP....HAS TRUE DEPTH ...EXCELLENT STRUCTURE.

    I AM SURE SHE'LL LOVE THIS G

    peace
    g-man
     
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