Black Poetry : FEELIN' SOMETHING FROM NOTHING

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i use to think that life was a game,
    only played to bring pleasure.
    but when i sit back to look at it,
    i see so much more to measure.
    i see the love others give,
    and pour out to an unknown face.
    and just like Louis Armstrong,
    i see the world as such a beautiful place.
    now days little kids growing up,
    thinking cash is the way to go.
    but the way i feel about it is,
    u make it--don't let it make u fo' sho!
    and all the while i think these thoughts,
    i think man--where is all of this coming from.
    and then i look back to see,
    that behind me that--the shadow has come before the sun.
    and i know others may think that,
    this is no poem but a story.
    but i only write what i feel for the moment,
    i need no one elses glory.
    cuz i give glory,
    where it is do.
    i give it a lot,
    and i give it to you.
    but when u finish reading this,
    think about life for a minute.
    and think about all the good things-lest we forget the bad,
    cuz we all live in it.
    do u feel me?
    well???????
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: :spin: :spinstar: nice drop
     
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    sweet flowing ya pen is in a mix
    flow on
     
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    a very smooth drop on here, I like this alot poet. :geek:
     
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    Most times it's better to see that glass as half full, I feel ya.
     
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    I LIKE THIS FLOW!!!!
    I LIKE THE WAY YOU PUT THE WORDS!! :spin:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll, i knew ya'll would understand
     
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    Indeed...life is so much more than what we ever think....
    Love they way you flowed with this...Nice work!
     
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    nice drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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