Black Poetry : Feelin' like rhymin' on somethin' anti-mainstream social (the headbanger)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 6, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My pen is pensive been thinkin'
    'bout writin' spittin' fightin'
    with scribes that lie within my
    mind / ink brewin' spewin'
    from the barrel double knowin'
    it's gone be trouble trouble trouble
    if Miss Liberty don't deal me a good hand
    let the band play with woodwinds
    and blow this Union apart with our
    UNION as blak people blessed with
    skin dark or lighter melanin it's
    the gift GOD gave us he delivered
    US when ya'll enslaved us and we
    as poets are the descendents of
    the ones they could not
    kill on the side of the road
    blood cold vultures try to sell
    us our culture the sad thing is we
    swallow the bullshyt pills and ring
    the liberty bell when a KKKmart
    special is Code Blue/ light a match
    burn this hell and be true to who
    you know as you / tired of being BLACK
    and blue beaten by the boys in blue
    'til we resemble Emmitt Till lives
    America steals and WHO ARE THE REAL
    criminals? Brainwashed past subliminal
    levels the devils wear suits now
    and how now brown cow how do you
    moo? when the pastures you reside
    in are feeding you bluegrass poisoning
    your insides got you thinking Cleopatra
    really looks like Liz Taylor white girls
    blowing up your pager the BLACK WACk man's
    savior too many black stallions chasing
    white horses even on the golf courses
    my fault Tiger Woods no your fault Tiger
    Woods kids brainwashed "I want to be Tiger
    Woods" yeah since the money is good
    if he was living on east side Detroit
    he'd be just another nig...g...uh in the hood
    getting beat with a stick swung by
    a contry clubs members club back rub
    blak woman soothes me into eternity
    from here to my body leaves this earth
    then to my soul she'll give birth and call
    me Tiharka or Pianky kings from the 25th
    dynasty of Kush or Hip Hop fanatic
    brother Cold Crush brother blakverb
    akshunmanwurd moving swinging
    elbows smacking Uncle sam square in
    the mouth cause he's standing in the lane
    gotta get him before I go insane because
    of lame games wrapped in Cinquains
    seduce me with immorality trapped in
    a poetic style verse an old trick propaganda
    slanda to inject the curse into my mental
    with a pale dick to kill this blak diaspora
    patriot commanda but I say you can't
    ***** me outta my history you can't
    ***** me 'til I am diseased with Syphilis
    like you did the brothers in Tuskegee
    molotav cocktails on ready pen cocked
    to block rocks served on platinum
    covered blocks called record labels
    pushers of broken beat down depressed
    fables of blak folks oppression teaching
    lessons of as...s/es and bling bling
    regressions to money rules the
    world /and just like time/ the value
    of currency is manmade and what is the
    value of your life nig...g...uh? Killin' our
    people/ fillin' the space beneath church
    steeples/ because you are the prophets
    of tha anti-prophets that make a profit
    off of our problems from drug treatment/
    to 24 track song track completement that's
    got the masses shaking there rumps and being
    unconsciencely cranial cramped and bumped
    to the back of Society's lily white bus.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB

    BLACK AWARENESS!!

    YA MIND HOLD A STORY TO TELL
    SPEAR YA THOUGHTS AND SING
    IN FREEDOM TIL IT RING
    U SPEAKETH DA TRUTH!!!DAYUMMM!
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    I try brother. thanks.

    blak
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is any one gonna check this out....pleaseeeeee! Okay I'm tripping but I was curious as to what the feedback would be regarding this...:D

    blak
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  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ur pen...

    is anything but pensive, my brutha. but, as brutha $$RICH$$ says, "U SPEAKETH DA TRUTH!!!" there's not enough of US blessed with your form of consciousness...but i'm sure they heard ya. just keep preaching.

    One.
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller, you know I must man!!!!
    thanks brother.

    blak
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  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLAKMAN

    MY BRO. THIS IS SO **** TYGHT ....FELT LIKE I WAS IN THE PASSENGER SEAT OF A JET FLYIN' THROUGH THIS DOCUMENTARY
    ...YOU ELEVATE WITH EACH FLOW BLAK...I FEEL PRIVELEDGED TO READ YOUR WORK.

    SUPREME WORK RIGHT HERE

    ONE !

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    whew

    i need a iced tea man

    verb you hitting cylinders

    feeling the truth here
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    VERB

    you ain't no joke
    and ain't nobody to be playing with

    feeling your work dun

    had to send you two messages
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repostrepost
     
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